Wednesday, March 09, 2005

幽靈之痛

※我決定用最冷的寫法來寫這篇,看我成功與否?

It is dead
Dead in my head
Pull the trigger
Shoot right through the heart
Reveal the hollowness within
Cold and hard
I feel it.
Enjoyed. Maybe.
It's
flowing out of me
silently, unnoticed

It takes months to erase it from the mind
perhaps years, decades to heal the lil hole in heart

and another bullet coming through

※well...俾d時間我...... -_-

4 Comments:

At 5:30 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

wut's happening a?
un scare me chan on q~
i m ur luvli sis chloris a~
5 d find me if u wanna talk to someone~

 
At 12:54 AM, Blogger MusiQue said...

多謝你,
陳思敏你知道嗎你是其中一個我還頗肯定自己還愛的人

不是不相信,不是想逃避
而是本來就感覺虛無,很奇怪很奇怪
算不上低落,但卻不知是否徘徊在邊緣
十分rational的一種麻木
我已經沒有感覺了
或者可以借用某人經常用的一個"化"字吧
甚至味道還要再淡一些

這才最最叫我覺得奇怪

我還在努力的適應自己呢

 
At 11:37 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hmm...
好詩好詩 - 雖然我唔知你表達緊D乜情緒...不過真係諗落個背脊又有D涼...

你個trip好正呀!去左咁多地方。
我老喇,次次都係去一度咋,邊有你D後生咁好氣力丫。

係bor,呢排唔見你online咁。好忙呀?

 
At 2:03 AM, Blogger MusiQue said...

姜呀...你仲係咁鬼死抵死咖jet...係呀我成日自言自語地寫埋d無人睇得明連自己都唔知做乜o既o野...你講得中o既一點係,我本來的確係想寫poem,但最後一d都無refine過就咁低低能能且赤裸裸咁展現人前,真係羞家...所以我寫o既o野係絕對唔可以用文學角度去睇o既,否則真係體無完膚,甩皮甩骨......

去旅行...新嗜好,我已經變得好無大志咁無乜夢想,無乜特別o野想做,只想有一個平靜安穩o既生活,生活有幸福有愛,可以去旅行.講講下講到好似d少奶奶咁...Well,我唔buy"嫁o左佢就算呢一套",但我開始覺得,有時好難太貪心,搵到一個人同你好幸福咁過埋下半世,已經係好奢侈o既事,所以或者都未嘗不可,睇心態如何咖o者.

我梗係要一次過去多d啦,話晒我o係歐洲o既時間有限...!!!如果可以o既話,我諗我會有興趣返歐洲住呢...provided that我真係放得低自己o既家人朋友啦...哼好笑o勒.

online...我有咖喎喂,不過唔見你!!!我有on ICQ,我個MSN無神神死o左,人o地睇我唔到我又睇人唔到,超奇怪激死我啦...我會諗辦法搞搞佢咖啦......

 

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